
Beauty through my eyes
A smile for you
Oh! Water so green and the sky so blue
A smile for me
Aha! the view so serene
I stand here
At the shore
Enchanted by the divine beauty
And appreciating God’s creativity
I walk on the sand
Leaving my footprints behind
I play with my shadow
If only I could catch it, is all I wonder
I see the golden sun
At the horizon
The waves of the sea
Tickle my feet
I see the stars
Twinkling afar
It is time for the sunset
And for moon to rise again
Far across the distance
I see us
Dancing with the waves of the sea
Playing with the rays of the sun
Also, giving us company
Is the moon in the sky
Spreading it’s pristine light
I sit here
Strumming my guitar
Singing my favorite song
Because this is where we belong
Things that make us happier
And the breath taking backdrop
Couldn’t have been prettier
With this image hovering
I am only left wondering
Isn’t this the beauty
Truly for your eyes only
The vastness of nature - How immaculate and pure
The abundance of joy – How perfect and demure..!!
Close
oiiiiieee thxx u sooo vry mchhh Aruna ji.. u r vry kind.. :-) thxxx a tonnnnnnnnnnn for ur wishesss.. :-)
rgds
Bhavna
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congrats......to be shortlisted....in contest -22 -xpress yourself....Aruna
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Don't need to b sorry,, Mam.. as long as u came.. itzz al goooood...

itzz alwayzz a pleasure to c u here leavin behind sch lovely thoughts tat simply make me smile.. :-)
thxx u sooo mchhh for urrr gem of a commenttt n d recccco... really appreciate tat... kp droppin byyy n inspirin my lazy fingers to write ..
warm rgds
Bhavna
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Hi Bhavna, How did I not see this before .Sorry
Aha ! the view / the words create such a serennnneeeee ambience.......and it matches perfectly with the delightful photograph !! What a wonderful play of words hey!
Loved the lines....
The vastness of nature--How immaculate and pure
The abundance of joy-- How perfect and demure !
A demure narrator u are :))) keep flowing your immaculate thoughts.....
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Wowww.. thxx u for schh a nice commentt,, Ajit Sir... m reallyyyy glad u liked it so vryy mchhhh.. :-)
thx for dropin byyy n d reccco..
rgds
Bhavna
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bhavna .............................I am not sure if your thoughts are beautiful or your poem
then later decided
the thoughts has to be beautiful..................
only then the lines flow....................
it was smooth , lovely and enjouable!
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Hey Kiran,,
thxx for droppinn byyyy.. :-)


wowwww tatzzz vryy sweeeet of u to thnk tat wayzz abt d poem & d pic.. phewwww.... m really glad u liked it..
well,, jhumri.. heheheheheehh... i have changed it nowww.. too tooo many questions to answerrrr heehehehh...
couldnt find timbuktooo...
rgds
Bhavna
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Bhavna : Good one, your writing has done justice to the pictures ......its more the other way round, you poem is go great that even these pictures do not do justice.

I looked at one of the comments, yo u have relocated to Jhumri as well? I guess we will run into each other once in a while
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Hello Subbu Sir,,

so vry nice to c u hereee n leave ur remarkable thoughtss... thxx u soo vry mchhh Sir for droppin by n likin d poem... m really happy n totally appreciate ittt..
ur last line.. said it all.. how vry trueee.. :-)
Nature is such a beauty for which we adore our almighty who is the creator of unlimited fragrance of immaculate beauty
rgds
Bhavna
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Hey Maya,,

glad u dropped by.. thxx for d comment.. m happy u liked itt.. kp visitn..
Ciao
Bhavna
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