At times..
At times..
We go our own way
As we need our space to breathe
At times..
We have different opinions
As we disagree on something
At times..
We don’t like each other
As we get into those pointless discussions
At times..
We argue, fight and yell
As we both want to be heard
At times..
We hurt each other
As we speak our minds
But
At all other times..
We
Care,
Love,
And live
For each other
And that’s all what matters
Because
Committed, we are
Now and forever
Because
Committed, we are
To take the walk of life together
Holding each other
To be there
To live in that defining moment
When it is required the most
And all other times
Well,
We can choose
And we choose
To disagree
As if it didn’t matter
As if it wasn’t important
As if it was for entertainment
As we both know and agree
That most of the times
We indeed are two bodies and one soul
Two different minds and one same thought
So, committed, yes we are
Close
Welcome to my space,, Kunjubi Sir...
whoaaa... tatzzz quite a commenttt... n vryy kind n generous words... :-) thxxx for droppinn by n leavinn sch wonderful thoughtsss.. m really thrilleddd u likedd tizz one.. luk forward to seeing more of u here...
rgds
Bhavna
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Bhavna... May be i never cared to read..May be i have omitted to follow up yr posts. Now it is more than one month old. I just read this..I don' know how to tell you that I appreciate the poem. Alluring, Endearing.Words are not sufficient to portray the appreciation I have for this poem. Bhavana! it is touching the soft tissues of the heart.. the ethos is pacifying the emotions. and remniscent of many many things in life... Congratulation... thanks for such a lovely poem. Incidentally i have read yr 'tagged' latest one. You are a great thinker, writer, reader and what not? versatile genius! Like to read more of yr writings.. cheers.... kunjubi
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thxxx u aruna ji for alll ur gudd wishesss alwayzzz,, totally appreciate thmmm...
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Bhavna
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Hello Cindrella king.. (tatzzz an interestin name heheheehe..
)
welcome to my space... thxxx for droppin by n leavin ur thoughts behind.. m glad u liked d poem...
apreciate ur cmg .. kp visitn.. :-)
rgds
Bhavna
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Bhavna,
A romantic poem with deep n simple thoughts...
Committed, we are
To take the walk of life together
Holding each other
Cindrella King
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heyyy scribbly,,
appreciate ur cmg n leavin ur thoughtss... kp visitn.. :-)
tatzz sum food for thoughttt... i wudntt say tat thy end wid pain.. btt pain is a part n parcel of tat relationship... u knww itz like sayinnn one wants to b happy al d time bt tat doesnt happen.. so same wayyy pain comes coz expectationnss r higherrrr...
as i saidd itz a wholesum package n u have to accept pain as part of tat.. so thy dnt end wid pain bt u live widd pain as one emotion of manyyyy.. :-)
hopeee i made sense..
thxx for droppin byyyyyyyy n charginnn my damaged brain cellss heheheheeh..
rgds
Bhavna
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thxx u so mchhh for ur nice comments,, Kutty Sir.. yeahh indeed agreements n disagreements r a wholesum package.. :-)
thxx for droppin by,, m happy u liked ittt..
rgds
Bhavna
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i read somewhere that there cannot be any human relationship that doesn't end with pain. I don't have any clear views. but have u thought of that? I was put into mind because ur poem reflects both sides evenly.kya bolti tu?
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Bhavna,
Life is a series of moments
to choose to agree and to disagree
nice poem
kvakutty
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