Sometimes just being there in the moment
Is more than enough
Sometimes just saying you care
Is more than enough
Sometimes trusting me for being yours
Feels more than enough
Sometimes having faith
Means more than enough
Sometimes dancing with you
Is more than enough
Sometimes just talking to you
Means more than enough
Sometimes just being you
Feels more than enough
Sometimes thinking of you
Is more than enough
But sometimes nothing at all seems enough
Sometimes I might hurt unknowingly
But to feel left out kills me
It is in those times
There is silence even in the hustle and bustle
And delirium all around me
After all, sometimes just being loved
Is all one needs
But sometimes even the love
Doesn’t seem enough
Close
Thxxx for ur words... Kunjubi Sir..
rgds
Bhavna
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Bhavna... I am on the side of a goldmine now
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Hello anjaline ,,
welcome to my spaceee.. thxx for droppin by n leavin behind ur comments.. m glad u liked ittt... yeahhh sometimes,, nthn makes sense.. :-)
rgds
Bhavna
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wow! a real wow! so simply put. Lovely write..yes, sometimes 'love doesn't seem enough' when one is ignored or is second best.
take care,
a
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Hey madhuri,,
wazzz at ur space leavin a comment at ur beautiful poem.. :-) thx for ur lovely words & recccco.. am happy u likedd ittt.. :-)
wowww.. gudd to c u here...
Ciao
Bhavna
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Wow. Very nice poem. Touching.
Sometimes just being there in the moment Is more than enough
:-)
Cheers,
Madhuri
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heheheheeh nanua ji... baap re baap ...
heheheh... wah wah wahhh kyaa kehna aapke commentt kaa.. .. subhan allah .. heheheheh...simplyyy lovedd it.. thxx u so vry mch for lovin it & droppin by .. thx for recommendin as welll... plzz do kp visitn...
rgds
Bhavna
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Hello Komlet ji,,

thxx u so mch for droppin by n leavin sch beautiful words.. wowwww... tatzzz too guddd... kp visitn in future as wel.. reallly happpy u lovedd tis poem...
rgds
Bhavna
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Dear Chanchal ji,

thxx u sooo mchh for ur lovely wordsss... thxx for recommendin and encouragin alwayzzz... m really gladd u likedd it...
rgds
Bhavna
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Bhavna This poem is so so so good. Baap Re Baap, kyaa likh diyaa aapne.
How do you explain this "But Sometimes even the love does not seem enough" So deadly wording, laakhon ki baat chaar sabdon mei.
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