I am driving,
I can’t believe I am actually racing;
I know I shouldn’t over speed,
But what other way would I lead.
I am zooming past all the other cars,
Only 2 – 3 cars are afar;
I don’t know how it would end,
Just trying to make the 2 ends blend.
I can hear my husband saying,
You can do it because you have that zing;
I wonder if that is even the case,
As now I have a cop in this chase.
He is in his bike,
And I am in my convertible Lamborghini;
He is trying to bring the speed in control,
As I am the culprit for the entire furor.
My mind isn’t working,
Whether to stop or go on continuing;
I choose the latter,
And begin to see the cop way farther.
I continue zipping across the curvy terrain,
And driving for long has now become a pain;
But soon it will be all over,
When I will emerge a winner.
It all started for fun,
Now took a sad turn;
When I drove past a car,
Completely destroyed in fire.
Aha! I come to the end point,
Somehow am little disappointed;
Simply to find with dismay,
But it was indeed a genuine fray.
I lost by a few seconds,
And the winner took away all the compliments;
I am left here to ponder,
If this video game itself was the cheater.
I lost the bet too,
Sadly, empty handed, walk out the video game parlor door;
But with a satisfaction that makes me feel better,
That sitting here I just zipped through the life’s speedometer.
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Hello Yashasvi ji,
Thanks for recommending and yes i completely agree tat definitely in real life over speeding is brutal & dangerous. This was written all in good fun. I am glad you liked it.. :)
rgds
Bhavna
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Dear Chanchal ji,
Thanks for liking it & recommending .. :) Am glad you liked it.. :)
rgds
Bhavna
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recommended it because people in real life too try to over speed......
I liked the way you narrated the thoughts
yashasvi
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Dear Bhavna
Day by day , you are in all guns firing mode and they are so lovely.
Keep your creative energy at full steam and give joy to us.
My Best wishes
Chanchal
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Hey WL,
i am not sure if it's mature or not but definitely is crooked heheheheh.. :) good to c ur comments here.. :)
rgds
Bhavna
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Hi Ehsas,
thanks for visiting,glad you liked it. :) what more can i say but the creation of a twisted mind hehehehe.. :)
Bhavna
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Hey PBS,
thx for the reco & your cute emoticons. They say it all.. :)
Bhavna
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Dear Subbu Sir,
Thank you so much for commenting so beautifully. Thanks for all the inspiration. I liked your comment in poetry form. It's too good.. :)
rgds,
Bhavna
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Hello Yash Uncle,
Thank you for the adulation.. :)
rgds,
Bhavna
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Hi Meera,
Thanks for zipping by.. :) I am glad you liked it. Thx.. !!
Bhavna
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